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I continue to hammer out my rewrite. I decided to add a whole new eight-page scene at the beginning of the novel to give more insight into the main character. This will be the new chapter one, and I have written it from an inconsequential character's point of view to give the outsider's take on the main character (Jake). (I think I will have this character cross paths with Jake at the end to show the change in Jake's character.

So tonight, I finish making changes, print the thing out, and make more changes. I may have to touch it up even more tomorrow night before I send it to the other members of my workshop.